Reflection to Draft #1 of Research Paper

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Reflection
Composing my first draft was difficult because I felt I had a topic I didn’t know much about. It was difficult because, unlike my other classes, this research paper required me to answer my own question other than answering questions already given to me. One of the learning objective I think I did well was research. I used the John Jay One Search data base and Google Scholar to find a couple books and a few peer reviewed articles. I wish I could’ve found some government documents or memoirs.

Another learning objective I think I achieved writing my draft was sentence fluency. I think this because I tried to explain my quotes before adding them to my work. I also think I achieved awareness and reflection because I am aware that I sometimes am repetitive in my writing. I want to work on Invention and Inquiry because I want to be able to further my ideas and explain myself better. I want to able to analyze thoroughly the information that I acquire. 

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